Nowadays, most people try to balance between work and other part of lives. Unfortunately, not many achieve this balance. What are the problems of this? Suggest some solutions to solve the problem?
In hustle and bustle society today, a majority of residents cannot poise between career and other concerns in their life. In my perspective, I think that this matter has negative influences on people and this essay will present a number of methods to address it.
First of all, significantly focusing on work will make worker's health becoming dramatic degradation. To successful in employment, there are individuals ready to sacrifice their daily physical exercise and stay up all night to finish projects as soon as possible. For example, in many places in the world or particularly in Japan, we can easily see images of Japanese officers dozing off in public areas. This is clear proof to prove employees in the globalization era are not guaranteeing their health and they accept to sell it to get their task done or just to please their boss. Secondly, the working style also reduces their time to spend on family. Parents will not have enough time taking care of their children. As a result, children can easily go on the wrong track due to without adequate supervision and the gap between generations is getting bigger. For instance, in society that values learning as it is today, parents have tend to force their kids to study too much and put a great expectation on their offspring, however, father and mother do not really understand what children want. A number of teenagers have fallen into depression and a few of them committed suicide.
Therefore, some practical solutions should be applied to mitigate the problem. Firstly, governments can enact laws such as decrease extra working hours as well as companies also can increase the amount of days off for staff. The Japanese authority has adopted the labor reform law, whereby overtime hours for workers are only a maximum of 45 hours a month and 360 hours a year. Besides, people should plan a flexible schedule for their life. Supposing, some days, they might concentrate more on work, while others might have more time and energy to pursue their hobbies or relaxing with their loved one.
In conclusion, a work-life imbalance is harmful impacts on people's health and family and some steps should be performed to delete this lifestyle.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 937, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'tended'.
Suggestion: tended
...s learning as it is today, parents have tend to force their kids to study too much a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1841.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 370.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97567567568 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61172414219 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618918918919 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 572.4 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2027343999 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.294117647 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7647058824 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4705882353 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133172157969 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0424708249223 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450588309319 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0986226164 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345770547374 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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