Nowadays museums have become more and more important. What are the purposes of places such as museum and how should they be funded?
In the modern world, museums have been receiving a great deal of public attention due to its importance. Therefore, there are several ways to fund museums or galleries and various purposes of these traditional buildings.
Museums serves proposes in term of education and entertainment as well as cultural and historical heritage preservation. First of all, museums can provide visitors with first-hand experience of antiques or artworks. This mean that travellers can connect what they have learned via books, the Internet to what they see in museums. Secondly, since it is also one of the best means to educate children in the way, it can create a favourable condition for teenagers to gain deeper insight into the sacrifice of our predecessors and cultivate patriotism. Plenty of evidence suggests that students will be more interested in history in school than normally by visiting museums.
The financial support for museums can come under many forms, but I strongly believe that they should be funded by governments and self-earned income. The authorities can allocate their national budget to constructing new buildings, collecting ancient artifacts or art masterpieces for display. By providing financial incentives its cultural, historical, and even religious heritage. Moreover, museums are supposed to depend on their strengths, exploring potential market by selling souvenirs. For instance, they could sell booklets of exhibits or specifics handicrafts in gift shops, bookstores or though leasing museum halls for the organisation of their social events.
In conclusion, museums and galleries hold remarkable educational functions about nation’s traditional culture. Accordingly, I highly recommended that these traditional buildings should be invested by the governments. If this recommendation is carried out, the comprehensive development of our society will be ensured.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1612.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.75714285714 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1392511781 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.678571428571 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.6091257449 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.466666667 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.13333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264262086328 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0762270227619 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531597287288 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144743481227 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299215606712 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.13 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.39 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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