Every person in this world desires growth and reputation, so the younger generation has the liberty to decide their path and guardians do not want to seize their opportunities. I believe this is a positive development of their children as it will lead to a better experience and balance in lifestyle.
Parents allow their children to acquire superior experience as compared to them. Children these days indulged in various types of activities such as studying, enjoying with friends and use of modernized technology. Parents support their young ones to a create friend circle in the society, prepare notes with the help of computers and mobile phones because their parents do not experience these types of gadgets and friends who can change their thinking. For instance, children study with their best friends along with the use of laptops to iterate numerical problems. Therefore, guardians want their children to step ahead of them by utilizing these best available resources.
Moreover, parents also give freedom to maintain their lifestyle by using the latest apparel. The society has been shifted towards the western culture and youth is adopting these fashion trends which are necessary to progress in the present world. For example, many of the youngsters are mimicking the dressing sense of renowned public figures to become famous in the community. Thus, to obtain widespread reputation parents have given independence to their children.
To sum up, the world is transforming the children to achieve their goals with the advancement of technology and way of living. Hence, it is important to transform living habits as compared to the past scenario.
- Some people say that protecting the environment is the government’s responsibility. Others believe that every individual should take responsibility for it.Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 89
- Nowadays parents give more freedom to their children than in the past. Is it a positive or negative development?Give your opinion and include relevant examples. 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 251, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...gy. Parents support their young ones to a create friend circle in the society, prepare n...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1397.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27169811321 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71929670718 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596226415094 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2129008016 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.461538462 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212414410708 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786751029882 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581670448537 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118250792558 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0256794278786 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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