Environmental pollution is becoming a huge concern because of the growth in the industrial sector. Some people presume that government bodies initiate laws for protecting the environment, however other says that taking care of natural habitat is
accountable to everyone. Thus, this essay will highlight both views together.
The government agencies should apply strict rules and regulations to the factories. The industries are releasing gas emissions and waste, which eventually leads to various forms of environmental pollution. The national agencies ultimately ban or deposit fine from these industries will automatically help to reduce environmental pollution. For instance, National Green Tribunal, India has banned the 69 industries that had surpassed the permissible limit for emissions of harmful gases. Furthermore, the government should introduce the utilization of electric vehicles. These types of transport facilities will allow minimizing the use of petrol and diesel vehicles, which releases toxic gases in the atmosphere. For example, many automobile companies are manufacturing electric driven cars to reduce pollution and save the natural surroundings.
However, citizens can adapt their daily commuting with bicycles in the cities. If commuters prefer this mode of transport it will minimize the vehicles run on the roads, thus saving the environment from air pollution. For example, the citizen of Amsterdam prefers bicycles for traveling to the market which illustrates the greener environment. Moreover, people have to plant more and more trees. The planting of trees is the best-case scenario, plantation absorbs the carbon dioxide and other gases released into the atmosphere which is causing the greenhouse effect. Therefore, in this way, individuals will also put their efforts to save the heavenly abode.
In conclusion, both the government and the masses are equally responsible for protecting the environment. But, it is the first duty for every individual to maintain their habitat before this becomes a serious issue.
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- Some people say that protecting the environment is the government’s responsibility. Others believe that every individual should take responsibility for it.Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 207, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1756.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.77631578947 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97460832171 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615131578947 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.9023328662 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5555555556 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8888888889 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38888888889 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190919493982 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0576375056569 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661180149318 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117692028283 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608379731215 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.95 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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