Nowadays parents put too much pressure on their children to succeed what is the reason for doing this Is this a negative or positive development

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: There
...ts put their pressure on their children.There are many reasons for behind this. It in...
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Line 1, column 161, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'increases'?
Suggestion: increases
...re are many reasons for behind this. It increase negative development Parents wants m...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...should not pressurise their children so thats why children become cunning and bad.In ...
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Suggestion: In
...ats why children become cunning and bad.In these days everyone wants to become suc...
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Suggestion: There
...ts put their pressure on their children.There are many reasons for behind this. It in...
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Message: Did you mean 'increases'?
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...re are many reasons for behind this. It increase negative development Parents wants m...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...should not pressurise their children so thats why children become cunning and bad.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1030.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 187.0 315.596192385 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50802139037 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47559508402 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 63.0 176.041082164 36% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.336898395722 0.561755894193 60% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 280.8 506.74238477 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.6461717015 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.142857143 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7142857143 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.857142857143 7.06120827912 12% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303245013976 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.201899310064 0.084324248473 239% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0755002816301 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205761211623 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105249903179 0.056905535591 185% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.45 8.58950901804 75% => OK
difficult_words: 18.0 78.4519038076 23% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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