Nowadays parents put too much pressure on their children to succeed. What is the reason for doing this? Is it a negative or positive development?
In a fast-paced society, parents have put heavy pressure on children from studying to daily habits with the hope that they will have a successful life. Various reasons explain why children deal with parental pressure, I believe that this tendency can bring many negative effects.
There are several reasons to compile the children by their father or mother. The first reason relates to the desire of improving the quality of education in their children's academic careers. Parents believe that educating children earlier is better with great educational background and high scores can help children succeed in the near future. For instance, some parents strictly manage the spare time of children with extra homework or classes instead of playing outdoor activities with peers. Furthermore, these days, there are high requirements of society on the young generations such as certification and qualification play a vital role to have a well-paid job. As a result, parents put much pressure on children to encourage them to try hard to gain what parents want.
However, without a doubt, keeping some intentional force on their kids will cause a serious problem. Firstly, kids are easily prone to experiencing mental illness due to many factors derived from high parental expectations. If this problem often occurs, children can affect psychologically and physically such as depression, sleep deprivation, and an eating disorder. Low academic at school is a serious problem, it happens when kids have to suffer from various depression that leads to tired and bored with studying and getting scores. As a result, parental pressure not only discourages children but also creates disappointment in their scores.
To conclude, many moms and dads want to improve their children's futures by applying too much pressure. Although it is something advantageous, could carry some negative results. Developing good communication channels between younger and adults would result in better decisions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, well, for instance, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1682.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46103896104 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83383348927 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626623376623 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.5434002782 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.125 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0625 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32784641627 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100732102067 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742420547417 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182518812832 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596645731252 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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