Nowadays parents put too much pressure on their children to succeed.
What is the reason for doing this?
Is this a negative or positive development?
Most parents desire their children to earn more money and be successful in their future job. And, these parents sometimes urge their children to do things which children do not want. There are several reasons why people pressure their children. In my opinion, however, this is not positive.
One of the main reasons why parents pressure their children is that people want their children not to have any difficulty in their life. To be more precise, parents might have difficulties and not succeed in their life. That is why they want that there are not any difficulties in their children's life as they had. Another reason is that some parents may envy their friends' children. By this I mean that some parents like to talk to their friends about their children's achievement or talent. As a result, parents who hear other children's success try their children to be more successful than others.
On the other hand, to have pressure from parents all the time is negative for children. Although parents want their children to have better life, to pressure is not good as they think. Children may not be happy as long as their parents tend to order what to do things which they do not like. Furthermore, some children would tend to follow their parents. In other words, children may not have their own opinions, because their parents do not allow them to make decisions.
In conclusion, parents want that their children do not have difficulties in their life, so they try to do the best for this. I think that pressure is a negative development, since this does not allow children to find their own way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, may, so, i mean, i think, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1329.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78057553957 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40789389395 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.435251798561 0.561755894193 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.2207698462 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.1764705882 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3529411765 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.52941176471 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.391816763534 0.244688304435 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.172654250849 0.084324248473 205% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588692463669 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.309231601866 0.151304729494 204% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350066751832 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.13 8.58950901804 71% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 78.4519038076 38% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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