Nowadays, people are talking more and more about Environment topics like Acid Rain. This essay is going to talk about the causes of this issue and the effects that this problem has on our lives and the solutions that should be taken.
Environmental issues like Acid Rain have diverse causes. They could have natural causes, like increasing the amount of greenhouse gases by plants or the pollution that comes from volcanos, but the human activities that have been improving since Industrial revolution have been more serious. Since then human-beings have expanded their activities like energy companies that are used for our houses and vehicles by using fossil-fuel power. This leads to increasing the amount of pollution. As a result, the amount of greenhouse gases and the air-pollution are the most effective causes For Acid Rain.
Those causes that had mentioned lead to have more Acid Rain. This issue has lots of effects on our planet and even on our lives. That has dangerous results on plants, it could wash the plants leaves’s covers and make them stop growing because Acid Rain could change the composition of soil and water so plants and even animals would not live as before. Additionally, this issue doesn’t just have effects on our environment, it could destroy stones and changes building and statue’s figure. In other words, it has diverse effects on our lives that could not be ignored.
In spite of all the bad things we just said about the effects of Acid Rain, there are some ways that we could reduce the effects. This issue has several solutions that should be taken in order to save all the living things on the Earth. The First solution could be reducing the amount of fossil-fuel energy and use clean energies like wind or solar energies instead. Estimating the amount of pollution that comes from companies and cars and vehicles could be extremely helpful. Because in that case, the amount of pollution will be discovered and then they would be reduced by doing some some actions. Even one by one could make big changes like, instead of driving cars, people could use more public transportations or ride bikes in order to decline the amount of greenhouse gases.
In conclusion, every environmental issues have human-causes. By knowing the reasons, we can take solutions so we would have a better planet to live on.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: some
...and then they would be reduced by doing some some actions. Even one by one could make big...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, so, then, in conclusion, as a result, in other words, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1763.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9802259887 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5734215209 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497175141243 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.010743146 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.9444444444 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27777777778 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262861234108 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0973988132315 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650881935739 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154738378158 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0688592373275 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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