Nowadays, people believe that governments should invest tax-payer’s money in healthcare; others believe that money should be use in other areas. Discuss both points of view and give your opinion
Some people argue that the government income from taxes is needed to be used only in healthcare; however, a few people are opposed to this statement and think that this money should implement in different areas. From my point of view, the government has to decide which part demands the more investment in terms of country’s well-being.
On the one hand, tax payer's earnings have to be applicable in medical care. This is because, the country's most prominent sector is a hospital where every day thousands of people come and get treatments for their illness. This sector is required more fund for using the high technology to identify maladies in the human’s body and give proper medications. Additionally, there are many ailments have infected individual’s organs that sometimes lead to a plague. For instance, recent epidemic disease Coronavirus is now life threatening infection which killed and infected many people in China. Consequently, if the Chinese government puts more money on the research of this virus this not only helps people but will also improve the advancement of medical science.
On the other hand, tax payer’s income should use in other sectors. A country’s economy depends on the financial, educational and technological progress, and these sectors assisted economic growth. Particularly, if state authority spends this money on technology and education, the gross national income will increase; moreover, this will influence on whole nations regarding the way of life. For example, when people get free education, the illiterate rate will slump. Recent research has shown that 70% of world populations are now getting an elementary education which led to solving many problems such as crime, unemployment.
In conclusion, tax income can be used not only in healthcare but in a variety of areas. In my opinion, the government knows which sector is more important to invest this money.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, well, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1624.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30718954248 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86919915913 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581699346405 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5448260335 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.266666667 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236916538112 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0825377552423 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.087903704144 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164424555176 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537188178674 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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