Nowadays, people believe that governments should invest tax-payer’s money in healthcare; others believe that money should be use in other areas. Discuss both points of view and give your opinion
Some people argue that the government income from taxes is needed to be used only in healthcare; however, a few people are opposed to this statement and think that this money should implement in different areas. From my point of view, the government has to finance the sector which demands more investment in terms of a country’s well-being.
On the one hand, the earnings of taxpayers have to be applicable in medical care. This is because, the country's most prominent sector is a hospital where every day thousands of people come and get treatments for their illness. This sector is required more funds for using high technology to identify maladies in the human’s body as well as give proper medications. Additionally, there are many ailments can infect an individual’s organs that sometimes lead to a plague. For instance, a recent widespread disease called Coronavirus is now a life-threatening infection that already has killed and infected many people on earth. If the authority would put more money on the research of this pandemic this would not only help people but would have also improved the advancement of medical science.
By contrast, tax payer’s income should use in other sectors such as rural development, education and Information Technology. A country’s economy depends on the financial, educational and technological progress, and these sectors stimulate economic growth. Particularly, if state authority spends more fund on these sectors, the gross national income will increase; moreover, this will influence on whole nations regarding the way of life. For example, when people get free education, the illiterate rate will slump. Recent research has shown that 70% of world populations are now getting an elementary education so that led to solving many problems such as crime, unemployment.
In conclusion, tax income can be used not only in healthcare but in a variety of areas. In my opinion, the government is acknowledged which sector is more important to invest this money.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, well, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1701.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29906542056 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90187937384 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585669781931 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8714785675 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.4 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208357165737 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0694677643198 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696771050384 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148846464898 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0681167590364 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.