Nowadays people buy a lot of things even though they do not really need them. Why is it happening in your opinion. It is positive or negative trend for the individual and the society.
Human's spend surplus money to purchase different products in the current senerio. It is happening because of individual demands and adverts. However, it is the chief reason of garbage and wastage of money.
There are numerous causes why people spend huge amount of money to buy different type of products. First and foremost, adverts is the biggest reason among the citizen to allure and purchase few things. For instance, so many people buy the objects tempt towards their favourite celebrities influenced a lot to spend a money on things. Similarly, marketing strategies is major causes of the arduous. For example, the availability of the shops are lucrative in the society to uplift the standard. Apart from that, these shops provide so many offers and discounts and people are dazzling towards these offers and discounts.
There are succinct affirmatory affects of this issue. Firstly purchasing several products is worthwhile to uplift the standard of human's because people can live not only aristocratic lifestyle but also become a image in the society to purchase products.
There are obvious negative to have purchase unnecessary product. First the excessive consumerism is leading to the problem of rubbish wastage. To justify, so many people of households things are replaced frequently by the new stuff. a massive numbers of objects are discarded and thrown to landfill side. However, people are becoming spend thrift as they believe in buying things which they may not need in daily life.
To recapitulate, shopping has become part and parcel of our lives. Undoubt, buying these product have numerous merits. However, it lead negative result of this trend outweight postive.
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Comments
The essay should get higher
The essay should get higher marks. The e-grade gave lower marks because of this:
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
you may add more content.
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also there are some grammatical errors, for example:
buying these product have numerous merits. However, it lead negative result of this trend outweight postive.
should be:
buying these product has numerous merits. However, it leads negative result of this trend outweighing positives.
or:
buying these product has numerous merits. However, its negative result of this trend outweigh positives.
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you actual IELTS level should be around 7.0 or over.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 316, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'money'.
Suggestion: money
...e celebrities influenced a lot to spend a money on things. Similarly, marketing strateg...
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Line 3, column 584, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rs and discounts and people are dazzling towards these offers and discounts. T...
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Line 5, column 210, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... aristocratic lifestyle but also become a image in the society to purchase produc...
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Line 7, column 234, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: A
...e replaced frequently by the new stuff. a massive numbers of objects are discarde...
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Line 9, column 84, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this product' or 'these products'?
Suggestion: this product; these products
...nd parcel of our lives. Undoubt, buying these product have numerous merits. However, it lead ...
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Line 9, column 132, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'leads'?
Suggestion: leads
...oduct have numerous merits. However, it lead negative result of this trend outweight...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, similarly, so, while, apart from, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31970260223 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63645051645 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568773234201 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.2791793926 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.3157894737 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1578947368 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47368421053 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 3.4128256513 352% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167206820872 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0449745756398 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529820115351 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0818945020896 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047837797343 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.98 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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