Different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1950, 1970 and 1990 are discussed in the graph below. write a report for university lecturer describing the information in the bar chart.you should write at least 150 words.
The vertical bar chart illustrates the information about in European city people use four different modes of transport to travel between 1950 and 1990. The data has been calibrated in percentage.
At the first glance, it can be clearly seen that, The ratio of traveler used in initial year was highest on foot at 38 followed by bike at 27. Whereas, the lowest percentage of commuters can be reported for car at 5 and the second lowest percentile of traveler used bus at 17.
Moving further, in 1970, there were almost same percentage of commuters used Bus, Car, Bikes and foot in the range of 22 and 26. Moreover, in 1990, the highest ratio of traveler can be witnessed for Car at around 40 While the percentage of commuters used Bike and Foot was lowest at almost 5 followed by bus at 15.
Overall, in the last year, the most favorable mode of transport was Car and the less preferable vehicle was Bike.
- Traffic has create so many problem on road.Do you think that problem should stop at society level and at individual level. 67
- Some people think that a car is the best way to travel in cities while other believe a bicycle is a better way. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 67
- Nowadays many families have both parent working. Some working parents believe other family members like grandparents can take care of their children while others thibk that child care centre provide the best care. Discuss both views and your opinion. 73
- In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems. As a result of eating much fast food. It is therefore necessary for and administration to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent agree or disagree with 56
- Nowadays people buy a lot of things even though they do not really need them. Why is it happening in your opinion. It is positive or negative trend for the individual and the society. 80
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 94, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'was the highest'.
Suggestion: was the highest
... ratio of traveler used in initial year was highest on foot at 38 followed by bike at 27. W...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, second, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 751.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60736196319 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5193294672 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570552147239 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 228.6 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4419462985 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.285714286 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2857142857 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 5.23603664747 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218017579994 0.215688989381 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109152357899 0.103423049105 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0996594072669 0.0843802449381 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144181350738 0.15604864568 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0882611339386 0.0819641961636 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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