Recently, poor habits in eating and unbalance diet are being problems for some people. This essay will explain the causes and various solutions to mitigate this rising issues.
Regarding the reasons, that are busy daily work and low education that contributed the most to the problems. In this developing era, people are more likely to focus on their job which make them do not really care about their nutrition. To illustrate, most of officers who work nine to five a day frequently buy instant foods and even pass their lunch because of high workload. Furthermore, the lack of knowledge about the importance of balance diet is the other significant factor which related to the issues. The majority people often do not know that maintaining regular eating habits and good diet have big impact to their health and productivity.
In spite of the causes, there are several solutions that can be offered to deal with the problems. Firstly, public campaigns related to the importance of maintaining diets and eating habits is needed. The government and any related parties should take an actions in socializing the campaign through any social media and televisions. The massive campaign will help increase the people’s knowledge. Secondly, a brief policy should be arranged in order to set any institutions for taking care their employees’ health through giving enough resting hours. Hence, the employee will have enough time for having lunch and paying attention on their diet.
In conclusion, too busy in work and having lack of knowledge are the driving factors affecting poor eating habits and unbalance diet. However, public campaigns and proper policy will help to solve the problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the officers') or simply say ''most officers''.
Suggestion: most of the officers; most officers
...e about their nutrition. To illustrate, most of officers who work nine to five a day frequently ...
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Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'peoples'.
Suggestion: peoples
...ich related to the issues. The majority people often do not know that maintaining regu...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...policy will help to solve the problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, really, regarding, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21167883212 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58641475113 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56204379562 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.1096831761 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.2 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2666666667 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.06666666667 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262777256472 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0844955512832 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0786973968297 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173476926616 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0622201537284 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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