Nowadays people prefer to move in big cities for better lifestyles, because they think that they can enjoy their life but people also face many problems. Moving to small towns is a good solution, government should motivate the people to move away from major cities.
Initially, people migrate to big cities because of good facilities. The first and foremost drawback to live in large city is that the cost of living is very higher than small towns. Citizens have to pay high prices for rents, transport etc. In addition, environment pollution is increasing day by day in big cities due to traffic manufacturing factories which is cause of many diseases like respiratory diseases. For instance, survey has shown that people who live in Delhi suffers more from respiratory diseases than other cities because Delhi is the most polluted city in India.
On the other hand, government can change this situation of people in large cities. Government can encourage the residents to live in small areas. Also, government should provide all facilities in smaller towns like educational institutions, parks, hospitals, shopping malls. Also they should develop the transport system. Moreover, government should create more jobs in these areas.
In conclusion, I believe that government should encourage urbanisations to move small towns by improving the situation of small towns and providing them good facilities.
- Nowadays, people living in large cities face many problems in their dayly lives. What are these problems? Do you think thatthe government should encourage people to move in smaller towns? 56
- Nowadays, people living in large cities face many problems in their dayly lives. What are these problems? Do you think thatthe government should encourage people to move in smaller towns? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 276, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ions, parks, hospitals, shopping malls. Also they should develop the transport syste...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1190.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 222.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36036036036 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71231025091 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558558558559 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.3437886771 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5384615385 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0769230769 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30769230769 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32904590314 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112408343046 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590982663876 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199555328499 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634304433995 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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