These days, many people prefer to live in urban areas because there are number of facilities available but they also face many problems in their daily routine. For example in Mumbai, Ludhiana, Delhi etc many people go for plenty of jobs and opportunities provided there and only few population live in small towns that’s why there is no development of small towns. In this essay, I will discuss about the difficulties in large cities.
The population density is more and the people mostly live in affordable houses pay lot of rents for it. Moreover, there is totally unhealthy life in big cities due to pollution cause by industries a, vehicles, garbage and poor air to breathe and unfit water for drinking. There is great hustle and bustle of crowded citizens.
In addition to these problems, there is sign of poverty and crimes everywhere in urban area. In large towns, many people affected by torrible diseases like cancer.
I whole heartdly think that this trend should be changed. Government should encourage urbanisation to move small towns by improving the situation of small towns and provide good opportunities of jobs, offering well education and another facilities in small towns and villages that the people would develop small towns and live a pure and healthy life
- Nowadays, people living in large cities face many problems in their dayly lives. What are these problems? Do you think thatthe government should encourage people to move in smaller towns? 56
- Nowadays, people living in large cities face many problems in their dayly lives. What are these problems? Do you think thatthe government should encourage people to move in smaller towns? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 198, Rule ID: THE_PUNCT[1]
Message: Did you forget something after 'a'?
...es due to pollution cause by industries a, vehicles, garbage and poor air to breat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, well, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1080.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 213.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07042253521 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58649231039 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619718309859 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.4062497375 49.4020404114 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293467192452 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0912683843598 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0754065539422 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15185551674 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0628810119043 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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