In this present day and age, it has commonly been observed that a growing body of individuals devote more of their time to work, resulting have more burden on their minds. It has always been a question, what exactly drive them towards work. It has become a vexatious issue, which drives an urgent attention. This essay will first describe the key reasons of this problem, and then will enunciate some plausible reasons to alleviate the same.
To embark with, there are numerous factors which is responsible for this problem. The root cause of this is seems to be the unquenchable desires of the family members. This is because, family members want comfortable, and luxurious lifestyle. Consequently, to fulfill those desires, people become workaholic, and they forget to draw the line between their professional and personal commitments. This kind of daily routine fetch more stress to them, which eventually end with unhappy life. Unrealistic deadlines of working assignments worsens the situation even more. A simple reason behind this is that employers give deadlines to employers to compete the work within that time. Sometimes, employees fail to do this, and they have to face the consequences of this failed attempt from employers. As a result, employees bring more stress in their lives. Therefore, greed to compete desires, and professional work projects contribute to stressful life of people.
An excellent way to tackle this situation is educating people about this growing menace. Civic authorities must take initiatives to make understandable to people about the value of their family life. People must have spend quality time with their kiths and kins, which makes them stress free. For an example, they should have night meal together with their families. Another method to combat this problem is employers should be responsible to distribute equivalent workload to all employees. Additionally, employers may organize some social events, and small get together to give break tk employees from work. For instance, they can also arrange some yoga, and meditation classes for employees. These activities helps employees to rejuvenate their mind, resulting more passion towards work, and less stress. Hence, people ownself and employers delegation of works may assist employees to have a break from stressed life.
In conclusion, it is logical to say that, even though unharmonious balance between their professional and personal life, and their workaholic schedule makes people stressed, however this situation is not insurmountable. If people and employers collaborate and adopt a sagacious approach then the repercussions of this growing menace can be reduced significantly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 218, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'spent'.
Suggestion: spent
... of their family life. People must have spend quality time with their kiths and kins,...
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Line 5, column 300, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ns, which makes them stress free. For an example, they should have night meal tog...
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Line 5, column 714, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'help'.
Suggestion: help
...classes for employees. These activities helps employees to rejuvenate their mind, res...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, hence, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2279.0 1615.20841683 141% => OK
No of words: 419.0 315.596192385 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43914081146 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82141224423 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 176.041082164 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558472553699 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 686.7 506.74238477 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 0.809619238477 1112% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.9723449333 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.16 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.76 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344029850804 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0907583065176 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439911508547 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210078348884 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476576685961 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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