Nowadays, people spend more and more time away from their family. Why? What effect will it have on themselves and their family?
The fast pace of modern life has witnessed a common tendency that youngsters spend less and less time together with their family. In this essay, I will further shed light on the root causes and possible consequences of this trend.
To begin with, the initiation of this phenomenon can be attributed to two main reasons. First and foremost, it is the high demanding society and competitive working environment that deter people from having time to gather with their beloved. As achievement in personal life and career is grownups’ uttermost importance, they devote the majority of their time for work. With heavy workload and longer working hours, it is impossible for these youngster to spare time for their family. Secondly, it is undeniable that a majority of young adults avoid family gathering time as they find it burdensome to cope with the disparity in mindset and living styles between different generations. Consequently, they show preference toward spending time alone rather than being with their parents.
This rising issues have fostered a variety of consequences for both offsprings and their parents. Considering grownups, there is no denying the fact that by having more time for work and themselves, their occupations and personal life can be better nourished and prospered in the long run. On the flip side, staying away from their parents would significantly have a negative influence on their mental health and family relationship. Not only the generation gap is widen but also the bond between family members would be weakened as time goes by. It is proved by scientist that grownups with more time together with their parents have considerably more achievements and success in life in comparison with those who do not.
All in all, there are two reasons that lead to the fact that young adults spend less time with their family and this tendency obviously bring numerous negative and positive influence on both side in the long term.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 437, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this youngster' or 'these youngsters'?
Suggestion: this youngster; these youngsters
...ger working hours, it is impossible for these youngster to spare time for their family. Secondl...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 466, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'widened'.
Suggestion: widened
...ionship. Not only the generation gap is widen but also the bond between family member...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, second, secondly, so, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1646.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1277258567 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67699328146 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554517133956 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.152578894 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.571428571 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9285714286 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07142857143 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328275322423 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115425480292 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657025385003 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191391608641 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0897553079181 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 437, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this youngster' or 'these youngsters'?
Suggestion: this youngster; these youngsters
...ger working hours, it is impossible for these youngster to spare time for their family. Secondl...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 466, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'widened'.
Suggestion: widened
...ionship. Not only the generation gap is widen but also the bond between family member...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, second, secondly, so, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1646.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1277258567 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67699328146 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554517133956 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.152578894 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.571428571 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9285714286 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07142857143 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328275322423 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115425480292 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657025385003 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191391608641 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0897553079181 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.