Nowadays people throw many old things and adapt new things. Do the disadvantages of throw away society outweigh any possible economic advantages ?
With the rise in modernization, a man has transformed his life tremendously. Modern culture is a consumerist one it is also known as disposable culture or use and throw culture.one of the controversial issue today relates to is any disadvantages of throwing old things and adopt new things and have any possible economic benefits ? In this essay I am going to examine to this question from both point of view. I shall explore the same from various aspects in the following paragraphs.
On one side of the argument there are people who argue that the drawback of considerable outweigh it's benefits. The main reason for believing this is that additional resources are used and take longer to decompose. For example - rubber, plastic, metal etc. When it take time it create more pollution and electricity gas. It also possible to say that drifts and competitive between friends. For example- nowdays people become materialistic and earn more and more money. After that they show their status. Last but not least it also creates bullying isolation and classism. For example- A recent research states that the Canada and united state of America contained only 5.2 %of the world population till year are accountable 31.5% of consumption while south Asia which had 22.4% of population is responsible for only 2% of consumption.
On the other hand , it is also possible to make the opposing case firstly society moves forward and increase standard of living . Due to this personal growth and country economy also boost up. A second point is robbery and deaths. For example - due to advance technology CC TV camera , security alarm such as banks , hospitals, streets.
As we have seen that there are number of answer to this question. However , I tend believe that government should make the law of 3 hours reduce , reuse , recycle . The possibilities are endless a person just have to take the initiative and make the change.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, so, while, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1597.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00626959248 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7962079136 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652037617555 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 59.451555909 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.85 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.95 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143937481243 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0280618063396 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689314543036 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0773871654587 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0803496037771 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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