Nowadays public transport prices are constantly increasing. Why do you think it is happening? How can this problem be solved?
In the contemporary era, the cost of public movement continues to rise, creating various kinds of problems for the general public. Some people believe that fossil fuels are expensive and this is the main reason for this problem. In addition, environmental taxes and unstable economic growth are other factors affecting transport costs. Personally, I believe that introducing alternative types of vehicles such as electric buses and cars can alleviate the problem.
On the one hand, it is obvious that the administrative costs of companies can cause high prices for bus and train tickets. In this regard, many companies seek to pay allowances and bonuses to company directors. For instance, the Presto Transit company in Toronto has been paying high salaries to financial directors over the past decade. Consequently, this affected the price of transport fees. In addition, inflation and environmental taxes affect the cost.
On the other hand, the introduction of vehicles powered by renewable resources could improve the situation. Due to their independence from oil and gas, these modes of public transport can reduce the level of toxic gases in the environment, such as carbon dioxide. Moreover, another solution could be to motivate people to use public transport. That is, the more clients, the more income the companies will receive, and accordingly, the cost of tickets will decrease.
In conclusion, many people use public transport every day; fares are expensive due to the high salaries of administrative workers. However, new types of vehicles may alleviate this problem. In addition, the largest number of clients can generate more income.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 116, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...ating various kinds of problems for the general public. Some people believe that fossil fuels ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, consequently, however, may, moreover, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41312741313 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85164346041 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579150579151 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.5031115944 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.625 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1875 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6875 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196082332334 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065465487743 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051376459104 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12052152679 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0264095488363 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.8 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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