Nowadays shops have extended opening hours almost every day of the week in many countries. Is it a positive or negative development for shoppers and the local community?

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Nowadays shops have extended opening hours almost every day of the week in many countries. Is it a positive or negative development for shoppers and the local community?

These days people buying behavior patterns is change and shops offer lots of benefits to their consumer and that prospective many parts of the world have been open for long hours. Although there are some adverse effects on the people's life of the owner and staff, overall it will be beneficial for economic development both business owners and society.

To begin with, there are a lot of advantage of the store owners for opening long hours is increasing the sales and give the attractive offer to them, so they can visit the stores anytime. For those long hours especially benefited to the service class people. In modern times there is perfect competition for all the products and commodities, so a seller who will meet the demand in a better way can only survive in this competitive world. For show, big cities and the metro in India government passed the rule for extended opening hours for 24 hours.

Moving further, Increase in opening timings has significant importance for community growth. For example, the employee is working in shifts, so many will be able to find the job and living standards will grow into the various aspects of their lives. As sellers profit will grow and they will be paying more taxes to the government. Which can be used by the local authorities for various community development activities and income received from different sources and tax is one of the major sources of income.

To sum up, with, opening hours of the retail outlets are increasing in current years and it also helps the local community to develop in many ways and give to their economy to reach a good perspective level. Business men are also earning more profit and fight with healthy competition for international stores.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, for example, to begin with, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1456.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93559322034 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50297151756 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583050847458 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9416900961 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.333333333 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5833333333 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242466572973 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.089352933801 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584152430795 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144334335568 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0140053289727 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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