Some people believe that women are not as competitive than men . to what extent do you agree or disagree.
People often compare the abilities of men and women and claim that women are not as competitive as men. I do not agree with this argument. Women have prove their mettle almost in every sphere of life. In my opinion women are as competitive as men.
To begin with, Girl students outperform boy students in schools. If they are less competitive they would not be able to do it. Even in all the competitive exams like bank PO,IAS, IPS exams women are always ahead of men. If you compare women doctors,scientists,politicians with their counterparts they are on a par of each other. Women have already prove that they can do any job.They now work in almost in every field. They even work in aviation and defence. Traditionally, these jobs were thought to be suitable for only men. This is a proof that women have broken every stereotype set by society over last few years. The right of choosing their work is not given to them by default, they have come a long way by proving themselves in every exam. There are many prominent politicians around the world are women. Women are also working in the multinational company and showing their tremendous management skills.
Yet, the question may arise if women are as competitive as men, why there are less women in the field of business, politics and science. The answer of this question relies in the fact that unlike men women have some biological and emotional responsibilities which nobody else can fulfill. Having a family and rearing of children are some few of these responsibilities. To make a career in the field of politics, business and science one has to devote whole life. Unfortunately, for women it is not possible to dedicate their life for career as there are others responsibilities that come in the way of success. Furthermore, women themselves choose their responsibilities like mother over their professional career. Just because they leave their career for the sake of family life, it does not mean that they are less than men, in fact it takes a lot of courage to abandon something which they have earned after decades of hardship just for taking care of the family something which is still less regarded in our society.
In conclusion, after analysing the whole scenario, I would like to reiterate that women leave their career opportunities for the betterment of family, by doing so they are not making themselves inferior to men. Women are capable of doing any job as men. There so many examples of extra ordinary women in the history as well as today's time which explain their strength.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, may, so, still, well, as to, in conclusion, in fact, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2137.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 440.0 315.596192385 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85681818182 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57997565096 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93451162395 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481818181818 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 694.8 506.74238477 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 57.5994999978 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.48 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244000416187 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834111498998 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0761490925605 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18650121403 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0848266904674 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.