The world that we live in today is totally depended on money, is an essential need of our life.That is why nowadays people who earn highr, they work hard in the society.Despite, those people have no time for their children for taking care.It can be happened because of many reasons.In this essay I shall represent that whay this thing is happening and will give possible consequences in the following paragraphs.
There are three major reasons behind it.Firstly, in 21st century,everythings are expensive.People have to work hard for tackling inflaction issues.So,in this fast life, family do not get time to spand with their children because they have to look after everythings.Secondly, life become very hectic.People have to done their works in certain time,otherwise they will fall in conflict situations.Therefore, they do not get enough to take care their children.Thirdly ,everyone wants to earn lot of many.At the eand thay also forget about their children.Sometimes, they keep a child keeper at home who can take care children.
It can spread severe affects not only amongst childern but also can effect negatively on the future generation.Childern do not gain guidence of parents.So,they cannot understand anything appropriatly.They might rush on negative path by instruction of bad company.Furthermore, parents are the first teacher.Children mimic which they observe from their parents.But, when parents just focue on the job or a business then childern will not get chance to learn something form their parents.Moreover, in the future ,when children become elders and have a child then somethings may be repeated.
In conclusion, I believe that families or parents cannot give time ot time take care because they are buzy at work and want to earn more money.So ,children cannot learn important things and it can affect direct negatively on future generation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, third, thirdly, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1578.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.69675090253 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.35556537158 2.80592935109 155% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638989169675 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 69.0 20.2975951904 340% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 151.794886278 49.4020404114 307% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 394.5 106.682146367 370% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 69.25 20.7667163134 333% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 33.25 7.06120827912 471% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 39.0 5.01903807615 777% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345659344616 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.202961183167 0.084324248473 241% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.09231862407 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202961183167 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.09231862407 0.056905535591 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 40.0 13.0946893788 305% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -7.02 50.2224549098 -14% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.4 11.3001002004 278% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.96 12.4159519038 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.71 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 9.78957915832 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 29.6 10.1190380762 293% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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