Nowadays many parts of the world is suffering from over population issues, especially developing and poor nations. Adding fire to this problem in some countries, the children aged 15 and younger are increasing in rapid numbers. The effects of this ever increasing population is discussed below.
On one hand, this over crowded situation firstly effect the natural environmental balance. When countries are forced to feed more people with limited resources, the problem of poverty arises. Furthermore governments are trying to find more funds to provide basic amenities to it's citizens, as result they reduce the spendings on other developmental activities. On top that, the pollution rate also increases as more people trying to live in a limited place. Also this situation will increase unemployment rate of the rate, especially when authorities fails to create adequate employment opportunities to meet the demand.
On the other hand, there are some positive effects also. Youths are always a great addition to any countries economy, because they are the one's who can bring about some changes in the current scenario. In addition, if this ever increasing number of children are properly educated, then they will become a an asset to the home country.
In conclusion, there many positive and negative effects if a country has more number of people than its capacity. It is all about how the regime is handling the situation effectively, even though there are some uncontrollabe effects like scarcity of land and water.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...sources, the problem of poverty arises. Furthermore governments are trying to find more fun...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ople trying to live in a limited place. Also this situation will increase unemployme...
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...r hand, there are some positive effects also. Youths are always a great addition to ...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
...uths are always a great addition to any countries economy, because they are the ones who ...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...roperly educated, then they will become a an asset to the home country. In c...
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Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'a' or 'an' is left.
Suggestion: a; an
...roperly educated, then they will become a an asset to the home country. In conc...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... become a an asset to the home country. In conclusion, there many positive and n...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, then, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1286.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29218106996 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80261114075 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59670781893 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.4488923937 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.9230769231 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6923076923 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292906104631 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0981701394822 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0775179023892 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18107062705 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101168715425 0.056905535591 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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