Nowadays, some people put a lot of pressure on their children.why do parents do this?is this a positive or negative development for the children?
These days many of parents put pressure on their kids to perform well in every stage of their life through which they can achieve their goals. In my opinion it is positive development for their children’s because it will take them forward in education and their health issues.i will discus in details.
It seems clear that to achieve heights guardian's put pressure on their loved ones for brighter future of their children’s in terms of education to do well in schools and achieve higher grads in their academics which will make them able to get highly qualified jobs and happy future. For example, when i was a child my mother forces me a lot to different institutions where highly qualified tutor's teaches, but now it worths to me due to the experience i gained from those teachers has helped me a lot in finding job. Some times pushing children by parents can be beneficial for them.
In addition some times parents pressurise their in sake of their healthy lifestyle through they can leave a good and full of activeness which can safe them from health treats and can enjoy life. For instance, friend of mine take their 8 year old son to park in daily routine for some sports activity and for yoga exercise to remain fit and active they really put pressure on their kid, although he is very lazy in doing physical fitness. Forcing children’s for health activities is not bad option.
To sum up many parents force their kids a lot these days for their good future. Where i think it is a positive step because it keeps children doing well in education sector as well as in their healthy life. Parents never force their loved ones for their own benefits but they do it for their future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, so, well, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, as well as, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 24.0651302605 199% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63455149502 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36902469598 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521594684385 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.4169570793 49.4020404114 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.818181818 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3636363636 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1818181818 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334424632696 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152966279263 0.084324248473 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495443810057 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232908014426 0.151304729494 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0294792705391 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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