Nowadays technology is increasing being used to monitor what people are saying and doing (for example, through cellphone tracking and security cameras). In many cases, the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening.
With the technological advancement and their rapid and wide applications have significant impact on human being life. However, people using Technology because, it saves their time and it does work very perfectly. But, some people use technology for wrong work. Nowadays, people are using security camera and tracking cell phone; is it beneficial or not? Every coin has two sides, positive or negative. Similarly, i am going to examine both the advantages or disadvantages and shape of my opinion by the end.
On the brighter side, every criminal have their own mobile phone and they use moblile phone to contact with their leaders or other group members. So, the tracking device help defence people to catch them group and with the help of tracking system, defence people find the criminal location and easily catch criminals. Moreover, major use of camera is security and camera also used in the school or colleges to show the student or teacher behaviour. Furthermore, in city area government puts camera on roads for control the traffic system. In Addition to this, camera also help to monitoring tourist and historical places.
On the darker side, because of camera and tracking device, sometimes people feel insecure and disable. Because, some people easily hack any security device and collect some important memory. Probing ahead, sometime terrorists hacking camera and collect some details. Because of that tracing device and camera, people privacy are hurting. Majority people think that with the help of camera they catch theft but, they knew about the camera and wear a mask on their face after they do robbery.
According to me, due to security camera and tracing cell Technology, people does their work in discipline and they always rememberable their rules and regulations but, for doing missuse people put themselves into horrible situations. Finally, advantages of this development outweigh disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, however, if, moreover, similarly, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 10.4138276553 259% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1625.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31045751634 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59240149604 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565359477124 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.3749808693 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2777777778 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55555555556 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294325359445 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0946247990889 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616187757677 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181195458301 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305194134746 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.