Nowadays, there are a large number of coffee shops and fast-food vendors on high streets and in town centres. Why are there so many of these outlets?
What effect is this having on the society?
Eating habits have changed immensely in the past decade, and it is continuously day by day. Numerous cafeterias and junky food shops are located in reputed areas and it devotes to its effects on social life. This essay will examine and emanate the plausible views and their effect in forthcoming paragraphs.
To commence with, nowadays demands of youth are increasing in cuisine and cultural foods, to fulfil these requirements retail outlets take franchise infamous towns. Moreover, students who left their homes and go abroad for further opportunities will have to manage both their personal and educational life. As a result, they do not have enough time to cook homemade food in that scenario, they can grab food from neighbourhood stores and save a lot of time. Therefore, these kinds of situations prevent vendors to open more and more workrooms and earn handsome money.
On the other hand, first of all, sometimes folk suffer from various diseases. To clarify, as the trend going on about unhealthy food and drinking lots of coffee are rising number of problems among human beings. Youngsters even do not like healthy food instead they preferred street food which is made very quickly such as pizza, burgers and many more, which creates health issues like obesity, heart attack and cholesterol. For instance, a survey was conducted on 100 societies on young age people which shows 90% of people are suffering from severe cardiovascular issues.
To conclude, most pupils from different nations rely upon these reseller stores. So , buying coffee and instant food becomes a necessity in an individual's life.
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| 2023-12-18 | Nina Tsarevich | 78 | view |
| 2023-07-21 | Technoblade | 84 | view |
| 2023-07-16 | pafica4107@msback.com | 84 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 84, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ions rely upon these reseller stores. So , buying coffee and instant food becomes ...
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Line 7, column 144, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
... instant food becomes a necessity in an individuals life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, such as, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1359.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18702290076 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60016558692 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.706106870229 0.561755894193 126% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3523064272 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.538461538 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92307692308 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215358887633 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598080588183 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0330073238023 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110221943969 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00844849119931 0.056905535591 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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