Nowadays tourism has developed and contributed a significant portion of national income to it s own country Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this development and give your own opinion

Today, tourism has become a key factor in a nation's overall economic output. In many nations, the tourism industry has flourished and now accounts for a sizeable portion of the economies of those nations. While this advancement has many advantages, it also has certain disadvantages. This essay will go through the benefits and drawbacks of tourism growth and analyze how it affects various nations.

First off, a nation's economy gains significantly from the development of its tourism industry. It generates jobs in a variety of industries, including hospitality, transportation, and entertainment. Increased demand for goods and services brought on by the influx of tourists boosts neighborhood businesses and provides revenue for the local populace. Additionally, through visitor spending, tourism helps to generate foreign exchange revenues.By bringing in more foreign exchange, the nation's economy grows stronger, its balance of payments is improved, and projects for development can be supported.

The rapid growth of tourism may also be harmful to the environment. Increased tourism-related activities can result in environmental damage such as pollution, deforestation, habitat destruction, and loss of resources. Popular tourist areas can experience overcrowding, which would cause animals  to decline and species to disappear. Overcrowding in popular tourist areas may cause stress on structures and depletion of natural resources.

In conclusion,for a nation, the growth of tourism offers both benefits and drawbacks. While it considerably boosts the country's income and creates jobs, it also comes with drawbacks like pollution, cultural commodification, etc. Governments and other businesses must develop practical actions that take preservation of the environment first in order to promote the future of tourism.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, so, while, in conclusion, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.1 5.12529762239 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.47829278671 2.80592935109 124% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634615384615 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.4582200873 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.733333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167050523818 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0529970594692 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480227908026 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0955208689843 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406149868182 0.056905535591 71% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.8 12.4159519038 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.92 8.58950901804 127% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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