Nowadays tourism has developed and contributed a significant portion of national income to its own country Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this development and give your own opinion
There is no denying that tourism has made a breakthrough after a long time being affected by Covid 19, which raises the question whether it is a positive or negative sign. The essay below will examine the pros and cons of this trend.
On the one hand, the rapid development of this type of leisure industry brings back more business and long terms jobs for civilians. By investing money in such scenic spots as beaches and historic areas, the governments can take advantage of their unbelievable growing potential of them, which is expected to be capable of providing jobs for most local residents. Accordingly, that contributes greatly to reducing unemployment and raising the average income of the country.
On the other hand, the growth of sector service puts popular tourist destinations at risk of being destroyed by large numbers of travelers. In fact, besides the fact that a great many of the touring areas are not well-managed and lack supervisors, some visitors also do not have the awareness. Therefore, littering, feeding animals without permission and retreading becomes more and more uncontrollable. The most prime example for this matter may be the coral reefs along the beach in southern Viet Nam, which are seriously affected on account of scuba diving and activities related to travelling.
All in all, despite its negative effect, the fact that the government’s’ strong dependence on touristry can be denied. Furthermore, Governments may fix the negatives with proactive measures, the positives far outweigh them, in my opinion.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 117, Rule ID: WHETHER[5]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "the question"?
Suggestion: whether
...eing affected by Covid 19, which raises the question whether it is a positive or negative sign. The ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, besides, but, furthermore, may, so, therefore, well, in fact, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1307.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.228 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92670189804 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7260442088 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.818181818 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7272727273 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2727272727 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0807527427819 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0286805769851 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0263345829074 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0455391468431 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0289544637239 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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