Nowadays, traffic jam is becoming more and more serious. Some people think that imposing high taxes on cars is an effective solution to solve this problem. Can the advantages of this solution outweigh its disadvantages?
In this modern era, imposing high taxes on cars to reduce traffic congestion is a topic of public interest and concern. Although there are positive effects, drawbacks of striking high taxes on cars are obvious. However, in my opinion, the former definitely carry more weight than the latter.
On the one hand, when the government imposes a high tax on cars, some limitations can be foreseen. This action of the government will make people travel by public transport more than before. It will have a significant impact on the auto manufacturing industry. The car companies will have to reduce in scale and the price of cars because there are few people to buy and causing companies to lay off employees, leaving many people unemployed. Secondly, travelling by public transport will be inconvenient for many people. In big cities, they will have to wait in line for a long time to get on the bus, making it very difficult for them to get to the company.
However, I would argue that these drawbacks are outweighed by the benefits. This tax will encourage more people to travel by public transport. This will reduce the number of private cars, help protect the environment, reduce dust, improve air quality, and improve people's health without lung diseases caused by smog. Besides, traffic congestion will be minimized and not frequent. Secondly, public transport will help reduce the number of traffic accidents that are happening a lot. Fewer private cars will make the roads cleaner, more space for public cars. In addition, people will also have to drive less by themselves, safer in situations such as drunk, tired, sleepy.
In conclusion, it seems to me that the potential benefits of posing high taxes on cars to reduce traffic jams are more significant than the possible drawbacks.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, second, secondly, so, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98662207358 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61182386833 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528428093645 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.5021684904 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7058823529 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5882352941 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88235294118 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219822943191 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806626760788 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690362274796 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161434791975 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035131807324 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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