Some people regard video games as harmless fun, or even as a useful education tool. Others, however, believe that video games are having an adverse effect on the people who play them. What are the benefits and drawbacks of video games?
In this modern era, playing video games is a topic of public interest and concern. While playing video games certainly brings various positive aspects, it also causes some obvious drawbacks.
On the one hand, playing video games can be both entertaining and educational. Firstly, playing video games can help people entertainment. Playing games can help them relieve the stress, pressure that they have endured in a day. It can bring fun and will help people feel comfortable, more focused at work. Moreover, playing games not only entertain people but also help people in education. In many foreign games, the characters will talk to each other in English, which will help people improve their listening skills. There are also English subtitles that will help you improve their reading comprehension skills. In addition, tactical games will help people learn problem-solving skills and this is very useful in life.
On the other hand, there are a number of disadvantages of playing video games that people should take into consideration. Firstly, when people play the game too much, they can get addicted. Video games will often have rewards for players if they play long enough or get a high score, this will keep players playing and it will take a lot of time to achieve. The second harm of playing games too much is that it will affect people’s health. When people play games, their eyes have to constantly look at the phone or computer screen, and playing for a long time will cause eye diseases such as eye strain or nearsightedness. In addition, sitting for too long, people will be at risk of obesity because they hardly move during the game.
In conclusion, playing video games could bring about certain benefits such as entertainment, education, but its negative effects like time-consuming or health problems should not be overlooked.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, second, so, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08852459016 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65889308602 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534426229508 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.4296418178 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2941176471 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9411764706 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05882352941 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374002592156 0.244688304435 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160588149262 0.084324248473 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0817198960715 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246443573651 0.151304729494 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410873140404 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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