Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology.
In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make?
Has this become a positive or negative development?
family: Verdana, sans-serif; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;">From past few years, way of interacting with peoples has changed from before. Earlier people love to do social gathering and greet them at their home, but now things are changed and people love to stay at their home and talk to them when necessary, this major impact has took place because of technology. In this essay we will discuss positives and negatives points about the impact of technology in our community.
family: Verdana, sans-serif; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;">However, it is noticed that people love to spend their time alone nowadays, which increases the distances between friends and families. they prefer to talk via call instead of meeting them personally. even if the person are living in same city they have no time to meet them, people talk over emails, chats or call which makes them feel like they are in touch with each other. but even talking via call or mails there is missing link of meeting people personally which makes us incomplete. technology has drastically impacted the relationship between the families as they spend most of time in using phones or watching TV.
family: Verdana, sans-serif; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;">people who are living far from their hometown are benefited with the use of technology, as technology keeps them in touch with family, friends or relatives. they can easily communicate with each other by just few clicks on their mobile phones or laptop. which is really good for them. there are also some peoples who love to make friends from different countries and learn new culture or language whereas they can easily make friends on social media and can share their thoughts and can make new friends which will be beneficial.
family: Verdana, sans-serif; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;">Overall, I concluded that technology can be beneficial as well as harmful to us as we have discussed in essay for the people who are far from home and another who is at same city but due to busy schedule they prefer to talk via call which creates differences between in relationship. For some it is really helpful whereas for some it is harmful.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, really, so, well, whereas, as for, as to, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2456.0 1615.20841683 152% => OK
No of words: 398.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 6.17085427136 5.12529762239 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.4513338871 2.80592935109 159% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.454773869347 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 719.1 506.74238477 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 140.353362363 49.4020404114 284% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 175.428571429 106.682146367 164% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4285714286 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123423168557 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0610475673474 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440672359886 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0966644452928 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425057878938 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.8 13.0946893788 166% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.14 50.2224549098 52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.8 12.4159519038 151% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 9.78957915832 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.