Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships that people make? Has this been a positive or negative development?
In this day and age, it is true that technology has a great impact on the way we communicate with others. From my perspective , it has affected various kinds of relationship and I believe that this advancement has both positive outweight the negative development.
It is easy to point out that since the existence of the technology has alerted the way we talk in different relationships such as social life, education and business. First and foremost, with the numerous social media platforms such as Facebook, Zalo, Twitter,etc, we are not only making more friends around the world but also easily keeping in touch with our acquaintances and beloved ones by video chats without going ouside to meet them. Second, online education is becoming a common feature so that the students are able to interact with their teachers and friendmates throughout some online study applications. This way helps teachers and school children to save a large amount of time commuting back and forth especially, ones who are far away from home. Finally, internet , emails, phones allow bussiness people to communicate with their collegues and also have a virtual meeting that they can stay at home to work.
This advancement of technology brings many benefits for us. It not only permits us to contact with people in many parts of the globe,but it is more convenient for whom who cannot communicate easily with other people as well. Take the disabled as an example, thanks to some technological devices, they can talk and discuss their ideas to people surrounding them. However, youngsters nowadays tend to make virtual friends on the internet rather than going outside to have real ones. Consequently, it leads to isolation and weaken sense of community.
To sum up, it is clear that technology has been transformed the way we interact with others. Moreover, if we don’t depend too much on it, the advantages will be greater than the detrimental effects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, well, as to, such as, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1627.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06853582555 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79206505913 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604361370717 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1916112581 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.214285714 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9285714286 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324099769751 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0995743568781 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707945094914 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189248610833 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042495793502 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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