It is argued that it would be teachers and parents' role to decide whether teenagers should do in his or her future career for their own good. I opine that
First of all, it is undeniable that teachers and parents are more experienced in this modern world. They are more knowledgeable in terms of knowing what is going to be the best for a adolescent, from their personal or shared knowledge. Youngsters lack enough information of this world, they might choose a wrong or a difficult path for their future if there are no experienced people giving them advice. Many of them might end up being criminals because elder people are not there to guide them.
However, it is true that parents and teachers might suggest an area in the work field that a young person simply does not like. Passion and knowledge are the two vital components that one must have in order to be successful in his or her career. If adults insisted to push teenagers in a work field that they are not happy about, it is impossible to say that the adults are doing a favor for children's own good. Therefore, a good choice hobbies interests
To sum up, a good decision is not the best decision, teachers and parents should communicate with teenagers about what their interest are, and then give advice for young people's future career.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 155, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... career for their own good. I opine that First of all, it is undeniable that teac...
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Line 3, column 182, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...nowing what is going to be the best for a adolescent, from their personal or shar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, then, therefore, first of all, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1079.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 232.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65086206897 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46153147205 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560344827586 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 330.3 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.1481823151 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.888888889 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7777777778 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.44444444444 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261162181212 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10121750336 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.072329034362 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177269908114 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0670876109157 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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