Nowadays young people knows less about their tradition and culture than in the past .what are ther reason of it? What can be done to improve this situation?
In the sophisticated era, nowadays all people use the internet in their life. All age group like toddler, teenager and old adolescent etc. Dwellers are full dependent on the telecommunication. There are plethora reason behind it. I will discuss my point of view in upcoming paragraph.
Modern world of world information and technology. Today network system is very fast. They are all dwellers use the technology in their work place and personal life because they are easily connect one to anothers person. Afterthat, gone on the days, every person have a electronic gudgets like laptop, cell phone, tablet computer so on. They are very comman thing in human being life. Furthermore, they are very effect to toddlers life because they always time active in society site. For instance, whatsapp,snapchart, sharechart, youtubeand facebook etc.Then,they play umpteen online games are easily available any electronic gadgets.
To trigger with, they spent plethore time in the communication website. They do not involve in any activities. For instance, reality show, study,function and do not participate in any indoor activity so on. They always introvert in himself.they do not involve tradition and culture events in their life. Last but not the least , In think that, any schools are allow the one lecture in their school because culture, customs and tradition festival in any weekend .otherwise, toddlers should be learn they culture and tradition in their life.
In summarise,that analysing after issue reckon, parent have a hectic schedule in their life. Teenager time killing in their life because it is always active society website. In my point of veiw, toddler life is very memories period in their life. School are necessary give the lecture for tradition history and culture, customs in their.I think that, it is work for children life. They could learn alot thing about culture. They should be beneficial in their life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'learned', 'learnt'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, then, well, for instance, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1629.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30618892508 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84659171916 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547231270358 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.7071882762 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.8260869565 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.347826087 20.7667163134 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5652173913 7.06120827912 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 3.4128256513 381% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0976506591743 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0322282497276 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393230951019 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0687577974683 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0296544993689 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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