Nowadays young people spend too much of their free time in shopping malls. Some people fear that this may have negative effects on young people and the society they live in.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Nowadays a millennial hang around too much of their free time in strip mall. Some people fear that this may have disadvantages effects on a millennial and the alliance they live in. This can be seen in the way of to use in their free time. This essay will support this argument by analyzing how young people spend too much of their free time in strip mall and have negative effects on society they live.
In regard to the empty people’s shopping mall has played an integral part in our daily lives. First, if you don’t wake up soon, you have problem economic and heavy physical. In fact, shopping mall is pastime of many people in their free times but if can become a harmful habit. This is entirely possible. Second, shopping mall was attractive with people have trends shopping beyond income level, shopping can become an addiction leading to financial crisis. Habit shopping, for example, they spend money too much of shopping and when hey beyond income level they will borrow. This affects some families with members who are addicted to shopping, they may fall into a situation of no money, a lot of debt.
Concerning the physicality of shopaholics, the impacts that shopping mall has had on our lives have clear disadvantages. First, shopaholics are often shy people and negative, so they shopping is to spend out of control to cover their emotions. The physicality, for instance, research was said that shopaholics has the potential to be related to emotions and many other illnesses including: angry, can’t control myself, alone and depression. Second, it is hard to imagine how people now are able when they can’t control when they want shopping. Not only depressed, they also hide their own money to avoid criticism. Shopaholics will often hide this habit or lie about the real price of the items they buy or hide their spending on shopping.
In conclusion, through decades of how learning of to use free time, humans have received a myriad of its merits from save money to save time, raising the quality of their lives. Even though there will still be many hurdles in the future, I am firmly convinced that humankind can keep advancing and find a way to combat any problem encountered from shopping mall.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, still, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1844.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 382.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82722513089 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47734727625 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534031413613 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6821813099 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0526315789 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1052631579 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73684210526 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.464942848818 0.244688304435 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146305510089 0.084324248473 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115651355095 0.0667982634062 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.285053011644 0.151304729494 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.179609990269 0.056905535591 316% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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