The chart below shows the depth of snow cm in a particular ski resort in Canada in three individual years

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The chart below shows the depth of snow (cm) in a particular ski resort in Canada in three individual years.

The bar chart compares shows the depth of snow(cm) in a several ski in Canada in 3 personal years.
Overall, we can see that in gear two in April is marginally more depth of snow than in year one in November. However, completely different depth of snow can be seen if we look at the specific figures for particular ski resort in Canada.
Particular ski resort in year one in November is lowest among 3 years have number is 100(cm). Meanwhile, this number have significantly highest is 400(cm) in April. In the next year in December were decreased to about 50(cm) but in November this number about 100(cm). According to the chart, while in December have number about 450(cm) in April. By contrast, the depth of snow in ski resort in gear three in November have number 100(cm), but this number have significantly highest about 300(cm). With the depth of snow in resort in Canada in December and March. In these two months, the number is highest and there is a change much when it is easy to see year one about 120(cm) and year three about 150(cm). Meanwhile, year three have number 350(cm), year two 400(cm) and year one 450(cm) in March and year one is highest among 3 year in this month.
By contrast, the depth of snow in January in year one have number 159(cm) and year three about 170(cm) and lowest is year two 120(cm). However, in the next month these numbers increase dramatically when the first year increases to about 300(cm) have number 450(cm) and year two have 400(cm) but in January just have 120(cm). Finally, year three have 350(cm).

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, look, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 33.7804878049 157% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1234.0 965.302439024 128% => OK
No of words: 275.0 196.424390244 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48727272727 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2355977994 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.385454545455 0.547539520022 70% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 353.7 283.868780488 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.0218116778 43.030603864 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1428571429 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6428571429 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.23603664747 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310789915243 0.215688989381 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148934604021 0.103423049105 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0885499215434 0.0843802449381 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228265472404 0.15604864568 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419778092736 0.0819641961636 51% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.2329268293 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 11.4140731707 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.13 8.06136585366 76% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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