nowdays people use social media to keep up with the news. Why do they do this? Is it a positive or negative development trend?
Browsing on internet has become a more popular trend at global scale. It is stated that nowdays excess work is doing by internet and it is more faster as well as we
can know about anything which is happening all over the world in less time. This essay will discuss why is this the case and how it is a more positive trend subsequently.
Predominately, in modern era, the use of social media is enhancing rapidly world wide and it is a best source to get knowledge about vital things.
since, every nation is getting flourished through internet markedly corders are making best applications through which people can remains close to news and it is piece of cake to use.
for example, everyone has own mobile phones and they are using it for their personal purpose such as work study along with to enhance their personality.
Hence, every year government is providing free mobile phones to dustitute proponents therefore people are relying on mobile phones and social media.
However, internet plays a crucial role in everybody's life and it made life so easier for every masses. Since, mainly children are using internet daily for their enjoyment and studies
but it makes them too latharchic and they do not do any sedentary activity that is not good for their health. for instance, if learners and staff would do excess use of social media , it
can give henious effect on their eyesight and mind. Resultantly, it is a wastage of time for school educates and due to that it gives bad impact on their study.
Moreover, people are becoming more intelligent through internet because in social media have alot of knowledge available about their interest
Apparently, people can aware from danger circumstances because every day reporters give news related to their nation so if there is any chance of dilemma so media do aware folks through news , radio and internet. So it is a positive development for people. Internet have also more crucial benefits for everyone. AS people may earn money without doing hard work and people would found my feet in that work. To illustrate, American application developer made best application for young brigade . If they would use that application , they may enhance their knowledge and can earn a lot of money through that. Hence, internet is the best way to do work and learners should use it for their studies and assignments.
To sum up, technology is good but we should use it in limit because the excess use of everything is not good for health and mind. Every masses should use it for important work because it can help in dilemma and also can solve our trouble in few minutes. Every work is doing by internet now days
Through internet we can contact in far distance with anyone without and restriction and also we can make bonding with others by social media so it is a more positive developmen
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Suggestion: faster
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Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, such as, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2400.0 1615.20841683 149% => OK
No of words: 490.0 315.596192385 155% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89795918367 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70488508055 4.20363070211 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50581859881 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.471428571429 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 759.6 506.74238477 150% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.5099859517 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.285714286 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47619047619 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 13.0 4.38176352705 297% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28301852047 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0859038528528 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535882683451 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102400534553 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.063379158906 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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