People living in 21st century are enjoying better quality of life compared to people who lived in previous era do you agree or disagree?
In present scenario, development take place lot of changes which makes life more convenient. It is stated that technology plays cardinal role in the development and masses live a better quality life in this era rather than yesteryear. I largely agree with the given statement and this essay will discuss my viewpoints subsequently.
To commence with, technology has become a part and parcel in present life, It makes life more easy for people. Since nowadays every work is done on machines which saves a lot of time and saves a lot of money .
where it reduces the pressure from workers and make life as a piece of cake. for instance, India is at growing stage but have lot of facilities for masses where they take the advantage of these sources to make their life as easy as pie . like in factories, buildings and many more things work done by the machines and furthermore huge difficult work also done through machines which makes life easier.However, In earlier years there is no technology people have to work with their power and energy which would be beneficial for their health and but invest a lot of time and more money for equipment. masses have to do difficult work like mining, construction and so on.
Moreover, technology help in various ways like communicating, offer Electronic commerce system yo whole over the world. since nowadays people can communicate with their friends, relatives and family . such as, with the help of technology sources like Whatsapp, Instagram, Skype and other aspects. these applications make life more convenient and easier. this service available for 24 hours without any restrictions and In banks E-commerce create giant difference like now masses can do online transaction on their mobile phones and computer and reduces the workload from workers. this service is more fast. Furthermore, in yesteryear, there is no source of communication it is difficult for individuals for communication and people have to stand in long queues for submitting their money in banks but now life become more easier due to technology.
To sum up, in modern era technology make life more easier and convenient. masses are over the moon with the technology but creates more hurdles in life and proponents are over dependent on these sources.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, for instance, in fact, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 10.4138276553 230% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1915.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09308510638 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77081289224 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510638297872 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 612.0 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.8406888427 49.4020404114 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.388888889 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8888888889 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11111111111 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116857625545 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0417873056452 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435310962329 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0742234581622 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388197279815 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.