Nuclear energy is a better choice for meeting increasing demand,agree or disagree.
With the booming demand of today's world, it is considered that, nuclear energy is a great replacement to overcame this issue. From my prospective, it is a suitable way to fulfil the demands. this essay intends to elaborate the views of my opinion.
To commence with, there are compelling reasons to elicit this issue. One of them is to use it as weapon for defence purposes. Nuclei power is a powerful resource, which help army to become stronger than others. No doubt, its impacts are death full, but with modification, it can be formed as less deathly. Apart from this, this energy is also used as cooking resources as it provide heat and other useful things for cooking.
Similarly, the another credibly use of nuclear energy is to generate electricity. At present time, all things are designs as only used with electricity. By mean this, if this method is used to generate electricity then it will also reduce the scarcity of water. To cite an example, a large proportion of water is waste to produce electricity. So,this energy help to decline this valuable resource's use.
To conclude, even though, many hazardous effects are coursed by this source of energy, yet, these can be improved by help of scientist .scientists can reform this sort of thing and made them for the uses of common people . So that, mankind can get high benefits from it and save the natural resources for generation of future. All and all it is clear that nuclear energy is best choice for demands of today masses.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, similarly, so, then, apart from, no doubt, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1237.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77606177606 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56656644442 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598455598456 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.8806324392 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.3125 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1875 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0625 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141450068877 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0518308139474 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757138101875 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0930356883056 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409264357735 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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