It is considered that social status and material possessions are reflect the worth of a person.While honour,kindness and trust are not remain important.In my point of view ,both are essential to run the race of life.So,I partially agree with the statement.This essay intends to elaborate the reason of my opinion.
To commence with,money,being the permanent part of life,is tempting all the sun and dry to become materialistic.So,people work hard to achieve there targets as well as earn good status in society.It is justified that,in materialistic world,all the masses are attracted towards that person who has more money.Even more,it is not bad because people do hard work to earn money and status in their society.
On the other hand,old fashioned value s can never be ignored.To maintain a status as well as good relationship,it is quite essential to have the moral values.Without these,one can not get the target of his life.To cite an example,to run a business between two companies,it is essential to build the good relation,however the business become failed or spoiled.
To conclude,for the success in life,both the money and moral values are indispensable,without them no one can achieve the goal of their life.
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- WRITING TASK 2A person's worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such a honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, well, while, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1032.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 195.0 315.596192385 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29230769231 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.61527186585 2.80592935109 129% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635897435897 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 48.0 20.2975951904 236% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.0943363669 49.4020404114 201% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 258.0 106.682146367 242% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 48.75 20.7667163134 235% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.75 7.06120827912 209% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 5.01903807615 598% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154593561817 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0878701811377 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653988953818 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0878701811377 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0653988953818 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.9 13.0946893788 213% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 14.3 50.2224549098 28% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.2 11.3001002004 205% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.29 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.47 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 9.78957915832 306% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.2 10.1190380762 210% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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