In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
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Nowadays, our life has changed from our ancestors’ style and in line-height: 21.6px; background: rgb(196, 237, 157);">this modern life, we need some kind of supports, especially in mobile aspects. it is because people become more mobile and active rather than in previous decades. it might be the reason why some people think that much money should be spent on new line constructions, which connect some cities, to bolster up the human activities, whilst others think that it is better to use the fund for improving the existing public transports. line-height: 21.6px; background: rgb(196, 237, 157);">Therefore, in line-height: 21.6px; background: rgb(196, 237, 157);">this essay, I will examine both views and provide a plausible conclusion.
line-height: 21.6px; background: rgb(196, 237, 157);">To begin, new rail line lines might suit for busy people line-height: 21.6px; background: rgb(196, 237, 157);">such as businessmen or women. it is because they have dense schedules in different areas. The new line lines might have a sophisticated technology that made transporting matters more efficient and faster. line-height: 21.6px; background: rgb(196, 237, 157);">For example, an old train may take 5-6 hours for transporting from Pingtung to Taipei, while a Shinkansen (high-speed railway) can take only 2 hours. Thence, line-height: 21.6px; background: rgb(196, 237, 157);">this technology can support modern and busy people to move from one place to another in an efficient way.
line-height: 21.6px; background: rgb(196, 237, 157);">On the other hand, not every person think like that. it is because there is a group of people, who believe that public funds should be spent on fixing or improving the previous public transports. it might be true because some of the old transportations are still fully functioning and only need a little repairment to be able to accommodate the citizens’ activities again. line-height: 21.6px; background: rgb(196, 237, 157);">For instance, in Indonesia, there is a busway, it has been operated in a decade, but since line-height: 21.6px; background: rgb(196, 237, 157);">last year, it began to have many engine problems. Regarding that matter, we can choose to take the repairment than buy the new one. line-height: 21.6px; background: rgb(196, 237, 157);">Nevertheless, in a short-term period, it will start to break down again and if you can count the money line-height: 21.6px; background: rgb(196, 237, 157);">that is used for several repairments, it can cost a whole brand-new bus, which is more worth.
In a nutshell, new lines may give some people the opportunity to save a lot of time and the substantial thing, their time can be allocated to take care some of their businesses, which what they want, whereas fixing the existing transportations can not fully supporting our new modern life. line-height: 21.6px; background: rgb(196, 237, 157);">Hence, in my honest opinion, I would choose that public money should be spent on a new railway that adapts the new technology to adjust to our recent situation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, nevertheless, regarding, so, still, then, therefore, whereas, while, for example, for instance, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
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Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 7.85571142285 267% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2747.0 1615.20841683 170% => OK
No of words: 479.0 315.596192385 152% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.73486430063 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67825486995 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.75644372525 2.80592935109 134% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.482254697286 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 699.3 506.74238477 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
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Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.9926523255 49.4020404114 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.588235294 106.682146367 151% => OK
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Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
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Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787687817315 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717816121457 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117461844849 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453055003066 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.6 13.0946893788 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.25 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.