some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career,while other believe that it is better to get a job straight after school
Some people think that the best route to a successful career is learning at university or college. In contrast, others accept that getting a job straight after school is better. Even though there are some benefits of working straight after school, I believe that going to college or university is the better option.
People get a job straight after school for many reasons. Firstly, people can start earning money and become independent from your family. For example, Many students of other countries tend to get a task after high school to afford their living. Secondly, people can choose to launch their career which has more opportunities to gain real experience and learn exclusive skills for their jobs. Therefore, this may bring out a good chance of getting promoted to higher positions such as managers or executives.
On the other hand, I believe that students have more benefits. First, they can gain knowledge and be more competitive in the job market. For instance, If you want to work for a large corporation, you will have a chance to work there. Second, some jobs require academic qualifications. Degree is very vital to apply for their jobs.
For the above reasons, it seems to me that students with higher academic backgrounds are likely to be more successful in pursuing their dream jobs.
- some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career while other believe that it is better to get a job straight after school 56
- In a number of countries some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing railway lines for very fast trains between cities Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport Discuss both these vi 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in contrast, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1098.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 219.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01369863014 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60000657585 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602739726027 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 331.2 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.3947478456 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.4285714286 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6428571429 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.85714285714 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374418662234 0.244688304435 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134526896161 0.084324248473 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13472482111 0.0667982634062 202% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237935735285 0.151304729494 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.244761352301 0.056905535591 430% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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