In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
In various countries, some people think it is important to spend a huge number of money to build up new railway lines for the train that link to the cities. others argue that it should be spending the money on enhancing existing public transport.
On one hand, a railway lines contain more benefit to those people that need to travel between the cities and it is a long-term construction. A railway system provides a fast way to transport from city to city. it must be the first choice for tourism and the people that need to move from city to city. but railway lines have a disadvantage is that it cannot bring the user to a specific location, for example, you and just bring people to london but you cannot bring them to the london bridge. people need other transportation to go to some other accurate location in a city. Also, it takes a long time period to complete railway lines. railway lines are not just set up a line and put the train on it, it takes a number of time to decide the cover range, future planing, and related facilities.
On the other hand, improving existing public transportation can have immediate performance and provide more convenience to the citizens. different form constructing railway lines, it just takes less time to improve the existing public transportation. We can save time that used for constructing a new thing and focus on improving the efficiency of exsiting things. Meanwhile, public transportation can provide more convenience to the citizen. most of them include bus and taxi can transport people to a specific place in a city for example, when people want to get to their home from center of the city, most of them will use public transportation. but, this may cause some problems. first, people may need a longer time to arrive at their destination when they using transportation such as bus because the bus will have a number of station and it needs to stop serval time. other, transportation will affect by traffic congestion. different from the train, all public transportation will use the road in a city. If there have some traffic accidence or there have many cars at the same time, it will be traffic congestion and increase travel time.
To conclusion, construction of railway lines and improve public transportation have their own benefits and target customer. The government must have comprehensive research to investigate which of them is more suitable for future and present development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, while, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 7.85571142285 255% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.3376753507 276% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2041.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 418.0 315.596192385 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88277511962 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84928631402 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.459330143541 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 639.9 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3296381828 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1904761905 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9047619048 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334885425527 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11012108051 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0868880134559 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.249121438443 0.151304729494 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.145958321525 0.056905535591 256% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.