The number of older people is increasing some people think that this will cause problems in their countries,other believe this group is important to society .discuss both views and give your own opinion.
There have been ongoing debates whether old aged masses important for the society or not.some people think aged people create a enormous problem to the country. However,few other believe older group has paramount to the society. While this approach can be proved older masses beneficial in some countries. I will discuss both views in the subsequent paragraph.
Discussing the first view,the foremost last past few decades some countries face overlapping population which create number of problems for the nation such as lack of food,water,job opportunities and so on. Secondly,the government do not able to handle situation when country faced economy problem.
On the flip side, the supporters of the letter view favours elders has paramount importance for society as well as family. Older people are bone of society and family because they helps to take decision and teaches how to tackle different situations in their life. Moreover, aged person is a lock of their house. For instance, if all family members are worker then they take care their house as well as little children and teach moral values of their children.
To conclude and give my opinion, againg person is increasing day by day no doubt population create many people while government take relevant steps for giving facilities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, for instance, no doubt, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1102.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 208.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29807692308 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65725811882 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.697115384615 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 340.2 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5613120972 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.181818182 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9090909091 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3636363636 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334622390754 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106633586205 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532690579946 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171091311945 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102206447626 0.056905535591 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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