The number of overweight children in developed counties is increasing. Some people think this is due to problems such as the growing number of fast food outlets. Others believe that parents are to blame for not looking after their children’s health.
To what extend do you agree with these views?
A problem of modern societies is the increasing number of young generations who are overweight. Some people blame this situation fast food selling while others think that this should blame on the responsibility of parents. However, there are many possible explanations for this scenario.
Opponents of fast food outlets argue that the developed countries are filled with shops selling unhealthy, fatty foods such as chips, fried chicken at low prices. This has created a whole generation of adults who have never cooked a meal for their children. It could be because either they are too busy at work or fast food is too convenient for themselves and their families. If there were fewer of these restaurants or the prices were too expensive, then children would be less likely to be tempted to buy take-away food.
However, there is another argument that blames the parents for unintentionally allowing their children to be overweight. This view captures more attention and agreement of the majority of the public. It is understandable that good-eating habits tend to be established in the early time of life by raising awareness from parents. If children are given chips or chocolate rather than nourishing foods or are always allowed to choose their favourite foods, they will go for sweet and salty foods due to their good tastes. As a result, this habit will carry on throughout their lives and even transmit to the next generations.
To conclude, the two views discussed play an equal role in contributing to the problem. However, it is essential to know that young people should be encouraged to be more active by increasing doing exercises or engaging in outdoor activities, as well as limiting them to consume fast foods. A balanced approach could be helpful in this situation.
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- The number of overweight children in developed counties is increasing. Some people think this is due to problems such as the growing number of fast food outlets. Others believe that parents are to blame for not looking after their children’s health.To w 78
- Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required.Discussion both these views and give 89
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, then, well, while, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1499.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0813559322 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79679711753 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606779661017 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4410424579 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.9333333333 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86666666667 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303741065014 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0929707156346 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709443551513 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176478346688 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0849917066672 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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