The number of people who are at risk of serious health problems due to being overweight is increasing. What is the reason for the growth in overweight people in society? How can this problem be solved?
The number of citizens suffering from severe health issues owing to obesity has been rising. This essay will examine several factors attributed to the phenomenon and propose some ultimate solutions to address the problem.
There are two key reasons explaining the increasing population with critical health conditions in light of weight gain. Frequent intake of fast food is the first reason exacerbating health issues among consumers, especially the young generation. This is because junk food often contains a high amount of fat, which will increase cholesterol in the blood among consumers. Thus, people might gain weight uncontrollably, leading to obesity and other health issues. Additionally, a sedentary lifestyle has resulted in an exponential growth of obese people. These days, people, especially the young generation, are under great pressure of shouldering a financial burden to sustain their lives. As a result, they have to focus predominantly on work without spending enough time doing exercise, which might make them gain weight easily.
Nonetheless, the government can impose heavy taxes on junk food to prevent people from daily consumption of unhealthy foods. This can be explained by the fact that people are more inclined to ponder purchasing overcharged items to save money for other necessities. Thus, the policy could adjust people’s consumption habits in an effort to prevent them from contracting severe illnesses stemming from obesity. Another solution that might take effect is to raise people’s awareness of doing exercise. If people entirely grasp the paramount importance of regular activities such as hitting the gym or walking, they will opt for a daily sport to stay fit. Consequently, the prospect of being overweight and being hospitalized for medical treatment will be lower.
In conclusion, there are various reasons leading to the increase in the number of citizens with critical health conditions resulting from obesity; however, a lack of frequent exercise and the intake of fast food are more common among the young generation. Nonetheless, the problem can be alleviated by governments’ efforts to impose higher tax rates and educational programmes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, however, if, nonetheless, so, thus, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1866.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53709198813 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89181281175 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59940652819 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 575.1 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1734920624 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.764705882 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8235294118 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.70588235294 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264537106146 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761848039408 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587485350261 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143124697582 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605485886274 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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