In the recent era, due to the prevailing lifestyle people have to face different health-related issues such as for overweight, high blood pressure, and so on. Nowadays most people eat unhygienic food such as fast food which expedites the growth of many diseases in our bodies weight gaining one of them. In the current society, it is one of the major problems among people, different reasons working behind this. In the following paragraphs, both causes and solutions will be discussed.
On the one hand, people are used to leading a sedentary life at present because they have to work remotely by always seating in front of the computer screen. Therefore, lack of exercise plays a crucial role to increase body weight. Moreover, people are feeling more interested to take unhygienic foods and those items that are working as a catalyst to enhance weight. For example, in the UK a recent survey shows that young people do not do regular physical activities, whereas they take more soft drinks, chips which contain high levels of sugar and other ingredients that are helpful to gain weight.
On the other hand, this problem can be solved by maintaining some health rules. Firstly, regular exercise like walking in the playground or play different indoor outdoor games. For instance, swimming is the best physical activity where people have to work with everybody parts. It is not only good for health but also for the psychologically. Secondly, a healthy balanced diet such as eating timely, and quantitatively plays a vital role to keep the body fit. Healthy food will help them to increase their body immunity power.
In conclusion, to solve this problem government can play an important role to encourage people to maintain health rules through various media. In spite of being conscious overweight cannot be eradicated from society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...causes and solutions will be discussed. On the one hand, people are used to lead...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas, as for, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1544.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09570957096 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65897659271 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617161716172 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5111906575 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9375 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.75 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307536006689 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0922988280208 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757023335564 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198368368251 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0765789737494 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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