A number of tertiary courses require students to undertake a period of unpaid work at an institution or organisation as part of their programe What are the advantages and disadvantages of this type of course requirement

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A number of tertiary courses require students to undertake a period of unpaid work at an institution or organisation as part of their programe. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this type of course requirement?

Some university courses require pupils to take a internship as syllabus's part. To cite two benefits such as obtaning valuable experiences and improving soft skills, albeit downside that it is difficult to find internship placement.

First advantage point out that work-study programe helps pupils gain more precious experience for their field of study and future carrer. Through apprenticeship, interns will face and solve daily issues when working and saving experience for the analogous case eversince in briliant and tackful way. For example, as a marketing intern in analysing and investing market field, students are going to be educated how to collect and analize market situation for contemporary tendency of customer and giving idea or strategy to make profic by professor or self-study. Also imparting student to know more about working condition.

On the other hand, it also assist trainees to ameliorate soft skills making up communication. Via apprenticeship , they will always learn and have to continue dicussing, talking and making intelligent decsion, controlling emotion and maner when encourting to customer and unforeseen context and gradually seeping into their behavior. As a shop assistant, a necessary skill is definitely to persure client to purchase items at least one and how to do when client wants money back.

Parellel demitrit has been jogged down is that some situation it is tough for intern to find a placement for their tertiary course requirement. Because there are limitation of place where hiring employee, if there are, oftenly coffe or fashion shop not a business or company because pupils have not graduated and be considered not a well-trained person. Thus, to find a placement dor internship is really gruelling.

In brief, wok-study programe in collede and university impart student to gain more real experiences and improvement of esential skills. However, there is a drawback is the limitation of position for apprenticeship which make it more challenging.

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Average: 8.9 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, really, so, thus, well, at least, for example, in brief, such as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1702.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47266881029 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9662175823 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633440514469 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.8384304198 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.571428571 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2142857143 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78571428571 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121438439857 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0424403964986 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541048839602 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0613916784426 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288447394694 0.056905535591 51% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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