The information regarding the numerical data of travellers underground station in London UK. It is depicted by the rendarded line graph. The data has been calibrated in numbers.
To begin with, The majority of passanger numbers has been grew upto 400 at 6 am. Nevertheless, It was slightly decline approximately below 200 at morning 10 am.
However, The figure shown the fluctuations throughout the span. While statiscal data has been escalated above 250 peoples and reached till 300 human beings. Due to differed proportion which indicates the requirements and prioritise an individual. Then rate of station passanger has dramatically fell down on the number of 100 at 4 pm. These had been a dramatic enormous manifested the passanger in British.
Moving further , The data shown the intensely number of below 400 .The relatively varied decrease the neumerical proportion of passanger. While entire population have own vehicle for transportation.
To cap it all,It can be vividly manifested that ,the vast majority of travellers maximum reached upto 400 peoples ,which has initiated by 100 people in u.k. There is 200 humankind who slightly decline of passanger 2 pm.to 4 pm.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 59, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'grown'.
Suggestion: grown
... majority of passanger numbers has been grew upto 400 at 6 am. Nevertheless, It was ...
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Line 3, column 112, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'declined'.
Suggestion: declined
... at 6 am. Nevertheless, It was slightly decline approximately below 200 at morning 10 a...
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Line 4, column 133, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... escalated above 250 peoples and reached till 300 human beings. Due to differed p...
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Line 6, column 15, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... passanger in British. Moving further , The data shown the intensely number of ...
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Line 6, column 66, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... shown the intensely number of below 400 .The relatively varied decrease the neume...
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Line 6, column 68, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...hown the intensely number of below 400 .The relatively varied decrease the neumeric...
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Line 8, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , It
...le for transportation. To cap it all,It can be vividly manifested that ,the vas...
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Line 8, column 48, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...it all,It can be vividly manifested that ,the vast majority of travellers maximum ...
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Line 8, column 114, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...vellers maximum reached upto 400 peoples ,which has initiated by 100 people in u.k...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, nevertheless, regarding, then, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 998.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3085106383 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03328308083 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654255319149 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.3388599431 43.030603864 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.7692307692 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4615384615 22.9334400587 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92307692308 5.23603664747 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.215688989381 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.103423049105 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0843802449381 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.15604864568 0% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.3012195122 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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