In the modern era of society, more and more families cannot keep their traditional meal together anymore. Both the root of the situation and its effects to each family member and society will be shed a light in the following essay.
It cannot be denied that the crucial reason for this issue is that people become so busy that they do not have the same free time to others member. As a result, they cannot have a meal together although they want. Not only this, because of the different generations, it is too hard to eat at the same time. For instance, my grandparents always have dinner at 5 P.M. Nevertheless, after being at school, I often buy a cup of milk tea and enjoy with my friends. This is the reason why i do not want to eat at 5 P.M. Moreover, people tend to be more independent in recent years, so keeping the traditional meal is not easy.
Having a meal with all of family member has existed for a long time. Therefore, losing it always goes hand in hand with many problems. In the individual side, a meal is the most suitable time to share our day with the others. Without this meal, we have to keep it inside and wait for convenient time. In a long term, it makes us feel lonely and stressful. In the social side, it is so essential that we cannot lose the care, respectation, and love, which are all included in the significance of traditional meal.
In conclusion, blending in the modernization does not mean that we are allowed to forget our family and a meal together. With the listed causes and effects, we have to take strong actions to protect this old tradition and eliminate its negative effects.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1334.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47651006711 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52988088334 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536912751678 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9796238631 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.9333333333 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8666666667 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53333333333 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245170737185 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0814968980525 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504204449904 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144506867018 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0195168735428 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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